Hey, I've been posting my finished chapters online, and now I'm looking for feedback. It's not finished yet, but here's a blurb on the plot...

"Linos Stari is a student at the local Guild School, in college for a medical artifice doctorate. He is called upon by the Guild Leader to tutor a new student, entering his program late, named Reva Capella. He quickly finds himself entangled in a plot that suggest Reva is the culprit of a crime kept secret from the public. The one thing he knows for sure, is everyone's after a specific mysterious box. With more questions than answers, Linos tries to find out the truth, only to find he could be in over his head with no clear way out... "

Here's a link: [link]

Please let me know what you think if you take the time to read it!